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Nymphish's avatar

One of your best 🔥

Jean Shorts 3's avatar

👉🏽👈🏽

troy adkins's avatar

love how this one crescendoed. ending hit hard!

Jean Shorts 3's avatar

Thank you so much! It’s actually one of only a couple of my poems I properly enjoy reading back and I think it’s probably because of the ending. Thanks for reading!

troy adkins's avatar

it's a stunner. i write more poetry than i read tbh but that's starting to change.

MrsGreen 🌈's avatar

Heart breaking and beautiful. I feel the fear too.

Jean Shorts 3's avatar

Thank u very much

alex's avatar

this is really good, youll always be one of my favourite poets 💛💛

rewsnatcerroc's avatar

miss u so this is a remedy

birdbrain's avatar

i want this on my wall

Jean Shorts 3's avatar

Ahhhh 👉🏽👈🏽

birdbrain's avatar

damn damn damn damn